From 5b74117fc51aa3f171a6f1d191ee6c405a1a99b2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: miggymofongo <contact@miguelalmodo.com>
Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2024 16:56:26 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] fixed grammer errors scattered throughout

---
 about.html |  8 ++++----
 index.html | 13 +++++--------
 2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/about.html b/about.html
index 5137e9f..a0bb75a 100644
--- a/about.html
+++ b/about.html
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ $('.container').infiniteScroll({
         <h3>Some things I'm currently working on are:</h3>
         <ul>
           <li>
-            Migrating my <a href="https://migs.uber.space/blog">my blog from a Bludit
+            Migrating <a href="https://migs.uber.space/blog">my blog from a Bludit
               instance</a> to
             <a href="https://yakihonne.com/users/nprofile1qyw8wumn8ghj7mn0wd68ytfsxyh8jcttd95x7mnwv5hxxmmdqyw8wumn8ghj7mn0wd68ytfsxgh8jcttd95x7mnwv5hxxmmdqy08wumn8ghj7mn0wd68ytfsxvhxgmmjv9nxzcm5dae8jtn0wfnsz9rhwden5te0wfjkccte9ejxzmt4wvhxjmcpremhxue69uhkummnw3ez6vpj9ejx7unpveskxar0wfujummjvuqzpmyk2sz7zxn2vxrtylay2x30lsfedm083q7jagguxtaa933ej6txsnr0xw">
               Nostr</a>
@@ -335,15 +335,15 @@ $('.container').infiniteScroll({
 
 
           <li>
-            Elevating my consumer consciousness.
+            Elevating my consumer consciousness
           </li>
           
           <br>
           
           <li>
-            Deploying web services on this
+            Deploying web services for my community on this
             <a target="_blank" href="http://uberspace.de">
-               asteroid in uberspace.
+               asteroid in uberspace
             </a>
             
           </li>
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 68f047c..fe01a70 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ font-weight:400;
               <a class="nav-link active" aria-current="page" href="#">Home</a>
             </li>
             <li class="nav-item dropdown">
-              <a class="nav-link" href="https://migs.uber.space/">About</a>
+              <a class="nav-link" href="https://migs.uber.space/about.html">About</a>
   
               </li>
 
@@ -333,8 +333,8 @@ font-weight:400;
         <p style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">The <a
            href="https://migs.uber.space/blog/corporate-social-media-is-killing-us">
            corporate social media landscape looks grim.</a>
-          They privatize our means of communication over the Internet and tear our society 
-          apart with the constant bombardment of adverrtising and antagonizing algorithms. 
+          They are tearing our society apart apart with the constant 
+          bombardment of advertising and antagonizing algorithms. 
           Movements in 2024 need a robust communication strategy and the power of a 
           decentralized internet. It's on us to take back the digital commons once and for all. 
           </a></p>
@@ -395,11 +395,8 @@ font-weight:400;
           
           <h4 class="fw-semibold mb-0" style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">Move beyond strategic sharing.</h4>
           <p style="color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">
-          Find the right medium and channels and multiply
-          the impact of your story with a<a href="https://opportunityagenda.org/our-tools/vpsa/"> 
-            VPSA framework (Value, Problem, Solution, Action)</a>. 
-          Craft your message with intention and authenticity.
-          </p>
+          Craft your message with intention and authenticity. Find
+           the right medium and multiply its impact with tech. 
         </div>
 
         <div class="d-flex flex-column gap-2">