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The corporate social media landscape looks grim. - They privatize our means of communication over the Internet and tear our society - apart with the constant bombardment of adverrtising and antagonizing algorithms. + They are tearing our society apart apart with the constant + bombardment of advertising and antagonizing algorithms. Movements in 2024 need a robust communication strategy and the power of a decentralized internet. It's on us to take back the digital commons once and for all.
@@ -395,11 +395,8 @@ font-weight:400;- Find the right medium and channels and multiply - the impact of your story with a - VPSA framework (Value, Problem, Solution, Action). - Craft your message with intention and authenticity. -
+ Craft your message with intention and authenticity. Find + the right medium and multiply its impact with tech.